In response to instructions to write a short paragraph that develops a statement with specific example, Noelle Mendoza chose the following sentence from her paragraph on the legacy of 9/11 as an example of how to populate prose using human subjects and actions verbs to focus her writing.
From The Legacy of 9/11 by Noelle Mendoza On one occasion, my father, a Mexican man with tanned skin and a large beard, was pulled aside by the airport police merely because of his physical appearance.
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Trinity
9/22/2016 06:32:08 pm
This is not only great writing, but has a very great message as well.
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